Mossler's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tales of Zale - Episode 1]

You've improved a lot since the initial pilot episode! Everything in your animation is top-notch, hope you hang in there while creating this - looks pretty ambitious!

[Hello Awkward]

This happens to me every time I go to an airport. Glad you finally uploaded this - I adore your linework.

[Star of the North Fist]

This is one of my favourite animations of all time. Nice work.

[Anime Amigos 1: Miku-Chan]

Dude your humor is really on point. If you stick with animation (which I hope you will) I could totally see you having a heavy online presence, whether it be on Newgrounds or another site you choose to stream your stuff through. Great work man, but you can always improve! Keep drawing and learning, I look forward to your future content.

[Anime Amigos 2: Anime Con]

This was surprisingly entertaining! You obviously put a lot of hard work into this and it shows, but the animation was lack-luster. There are a lot of moments where it looks like you used the straight-ahead method instead of pose-to-pose, and if you continue with +2-3 minute projects like this, learning how to map out your scenes before animating them could be a great time saver. It also might translate your character's movements better if you keep the in-betweens of their swings and arcs and bips and bobs down to a minimum.
Still, the story was great, voice work was great, and the world you built melded well with the characters you created. Neat stuff!

RyanStorm responds:

I agree.
One of the things I want to work on more is creating stronger key poses poses for my cartoons. For this particular cartoon, my main focus was on forcing myself to cel-shade and creating pretty color palettes. I think as it went on my key poses got a little stronger, but like you said; the in-betweens could use some work. Its sorta has a weird early Simpsons look now, where things don't flow natural or look stiff-ish.
Also this is one of the most genuinely nice and overall constructive critiques I've ever gotten, so thank you sir!